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Open Poetry #30

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2004-01-19 05:18 PM

You are the tide
against which I fail
to resist
and I the sand
beneath your feet
Imprint your existence
on my soul
before i am washed away

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-19 05:25 PM

A passionate write...perfect tone and texture. TD

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-01-19 05:25 PM

nicely done Robert..

I enjoyed

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2004-01-20 04:20 PM

thoughts
the sand
of our mind
press together
by time
and tenderness
become beauty
left hidden
on beaches
to find
as shells
held closely
to heart
swirling

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-20 04:24 PM

Wonderful Robert...very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-01-20 04:24 PM

*leaves me feeling mushy*

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

6 posted 2004-01-20 04:55 PM

Outstanding write Frazier, a wonderful piece!!

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