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Open Poetry #30

Dachau- 18739

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-01-23 12:34 PM

Ashes rose as wisps of pungent fingers
escaping on a westerly wind-
nine miles outside of Munich
there was but one path to freedom
for a man with no name.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2004-01-23 03:30 AM

Tim, this is like a punch in the stomach. Well done.

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

2 posted 2004-01-23 04:07 AM

hi Tim,
very heartfelt,
well wrote richard.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2004-01-23 06:19 AM

I like this, Tim, a LOT.

I love short poems - short poems that say much in few words...well done...

one small whisper - it's Dachau.

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