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Open Poetry #30

courage to win-senryus

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-12-09 12:28 PM

would you like to play?
lets dance, ten bucks on the queen
I will never lose

because you gamble
just like you live, holding back
I hold back nothing

so cash in your chips
or I will take you again
winning is courage

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-09 03:00 AM

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

2 posted 2003-12-10 05:21 PM

Darkling, love those gut punches you keep knocking out with mere pen! Well done!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-12-11 09:54 AM

Great write.

Eric

WannabePoet
Member

since 2003-12-10

Posts 62
New York USA

4 posted 2003-12-11 11:53 AM

Wow, very powerful with few words. Nice Write

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-12-11 10:59 PM

very direct as usual, pulling no punches

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