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Open Poetry #30
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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
0 posted 2003-12-10 03:52 PM


A dark stain emerges
o o z i n g over smooth surface
creating an inked impression,

in surrealistic,  
      horrific relief.

A shadow on glass
      as drawn is my grief.

A simple silhouette
etched, looking wet,
a black puddle
  of emotional waste.

WhiteRose 12/10/03

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Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2003-12-10 04:49 PM

nice
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2003-12-10 05:29 PM

Thanks
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2003-12-10 09:46 PM

Enjoyed the read Ms Rose

M

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2003-12-10 09:50 PM


The title drew me into wonderful abstract notions, well phrased and interesting

Enjoyed
Liz
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