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Dark Poetry #4
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peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW
0 posted 2004-08-22 01:52 AM

Unwanted love
dying affection
tortured soul
hated perfection

Trapped memories
Unseen tears
Multiplied lies
forgotten years.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer
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brezee
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since 2003-06-02
Posts 140
1 posted 2004-08-23 01:12 PM

whoa, I love how this is so simple yet it says so much! and it makes it easier b/c i don't have a favorite part in it, it's just the whole thing! nice job!


~*brezee*~
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-08-24 04:28 AM

Honest truth in simplicity.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian
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