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Dark Poetry #4

i miss you

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-09-22 04:34 AM

i miss you
out of all the words i could find to say that
those were the only ones that really meant it
i miss you
and god how i do
with such a pain
i hardly want to think of you
but when i do
i cant even smile
it hurts so much
that we are no longer close
but do you care?
do you miss me?
think of me like someone you used to love?
or am i just there
in the memory
in the photos
smiling away
feeling so normal
not missing anyone
just being me
wanting to never leave
but i did
and i cant stop that
and i know you think im just being stupid
just being a girl
who complains
cuz shes unhappy
but excuse me if i mistook you for someone else
someone who gave a damn
but even at that
i miss you
and as much as i wish i didnt
I do.
I miss you.

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-09-23 01:53 AM

Oh god, this is the best of your reinvented poem writing style poems these days. It made me curious. Anyway I felt power, and agony. Keep this up, this is great!

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-09-26 10:27 PM

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(tear tear sniff sniff)

I can relate to this poem so well! I almost started to cry as i read it. Sorta hit home with me.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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