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Dark Poetry #4
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CobyFeelsMyPain
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since 2003-10-12
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0 posted 2003-10-20 08:14 AM


Yes, I am a foreign rose
In a field full of fairies
Dissimilar in shape but likewise in beauty
Scorn surpassing as my thorns everlasting
Quivering in a breeze
Calm
Loving the attention lavished from impoverished lavender
Wheels turning
As my leaves are burning
Unnoticeable, they cry with mournful sighing
Without action.

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
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1 posted 2003-10-20 10:27 AM

This is beautiful. I loved the metaphoric meaning.

gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
Posts 189
2 posted 2003-10-20 10:45 AM

Excellent. I love this one.
I felt like this travelling through South America.
Well done.
Connie.
baseballpoet
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since 2003-10-20
Posts 36
3 posted 2003-10-20 01:37 PM

Beautiful!!!  I really enjoyed the read...good work.
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