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Dark Poetry #4

No Title (This is a new format for me)

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-10-21 12:15 PM

The night reminds me
with a narrow finger
plucks that tender heartstring

You left an open wound
every place you touched
blooming into bruise

It's a long road to return
and worse, this way, than that
maybe more than it's worth

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-21 12:37 PM

I really like this format - very soft but very, very effective.

Asia

baseballpoet
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 36

2 posted 2003-10-22 04:58 AM

this was very touching...interesting format and I am a fan!!!!! Good work

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