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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
0 posted 2005-06-29 12:19 PM


The love I had for you
was a warmth.
A hot passionate glow,
at times
and at others, just
a soft caress of spirit.

It turned.

It became ugly
and cold.

Now it's a beast
of hatred
that I'm feeding
revenge.


WhiteRose

"fit to be tied"
© Copyright 2005 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-06-30 09:00 AM

I like it.  Like when someone sounds like a leaky faucet either by what they say or what they do.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"
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