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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2005-07-31 01:54 AM


Tonight, shared life,
Absent creaks,
Wired through the forests wake.

Shy tastes of wind, bristled through hair,
Beknownst to the shadow.

I believed,
Midnight was tattooed beside her.

There, I followed her shadow.
A swan banded with pearl colored pupils.
Creaks, left unheard.

Life was shared tonight.
© Copyright 2005 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2005-07-31 12:07 PM

God, I love this and want to write TO it.
It is but a beginning . . .

Midnight was tattooed beside her.

that is awesome, priceless line.
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