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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Life goes by too quickly My vanity is poor Time becomes but nothing Please milk me something more My experiences are slipping Through the cracks along my brain Am I a reputation? Should I know my real name? I am predetermined I am undermined I am self-seclusion I seek a source for my revision I am predetermined To be undermined Alone in self- seclusion I seek a source for some permission To allow me to continue To, allow me to continue And pronounce my real name Should I know my real name? Come now, borrow all my shame Unspoken in this staple mate… |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I like the rythm in this, it's solid, should totally be the chorus to a song or something. However I don't really get all of it, what is the not knowing your name thing about? just curious. - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
It's about indvidualism. It's not necessarily talking about your actual name, but moreso who you think you are, and who you are told to be. Thanks for the reply  , hope that helped. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
ok great now i get it, thanks dude, happy un-birthday!  - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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