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River
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since 2003-09-16
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my own little world
0 posted 2005-09-11 01:38 AM


Body is caving
from demon laden auras
shattered, weeping.


*not sure if i got the sillaables correct, lol.

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-09-11 03:10 AM

I was going to write about something similiar.  Yeah, this is cool.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2005-12-17 12:33 PM

Bonnie?  

Thank you.

LOL depends on how you say shattered . . .
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