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Dark Poetry #4

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cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-11-09 03:38 PM

Enclosed.
Safe.
Warm.

cocooned in this
cosy enclosure
forever.

Then pain.
Thrusting, pushing,
sudden gushing

loud primeval cry
of blessed release.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-11-09 03:51 PM

Birth.

(death?)

Death.

(birth?)

(I've been told I confuse the two.)

I liked the ambiguity--(letting me decide? I never will yanno

) and yes, the orgasmic quality of word choice too makes the thought go down yummy. (go down yummy? sigh. I'm always typing ambiguities m'self.

)

Well it was good for me c.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

2 posted 2003-11-09 04:35 PM

I like this alot, to me it's saying we are born into death...the innevitable truth. Powerfull write.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-11-09 04:54 PM

Emerging from the womb...that warm secure place. Fetal. And then the blessed event! Wow. That woke me up!..hehe
Love,
Terri~

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-11-10 03:52 AM

Thank you Mad Hatter for replying. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-11-10 03:54 AM

Hello Shara, nice to hear from you again. Maggie

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