needles. - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #4

needles.

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

0 posted 2006-04-25 02:57 PM

I'm watching the hole's in my veins
  Grow bigger, each time I cry...
      Blood see's no exit,
           Nor, do I.

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

1 posted 2006-04-26 12:40 PM

Very deep and to the point. loved it hope to see more.

SATURN

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

2 posted 2006-04-28 07:30 AM

Very strong poem..I definitly felt the pain!
Very nice!!

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-04-28 10:26 PM

Whoa, hey, cool.

Vivid and... not in the least subtle. Nice.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.