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Dark Poetry #4

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yuna
New Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 9

0 posted 2006-06-09 06:51 AM

eyes pale,expression blank,
wander through clouds of indescribable dreams.
Cold mist air, isolation surrounds
flaws my mundane mind
with either hate or death.
nothing certain will be for always;
change in time forbids movement.
Fearing you underestimates myself;
help me open up, just a little .
claws..........

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-06-12 02:50 PM

i like it. it has a nice mysterious quality to it. an enjoyable read

sic vis pucem parrabellum
if you desire peace. prepare for war.

yuna
New Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 9

2 posted 2006-06-12 05:11 PM

thank you, i really appreciate it

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