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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA 
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Frozen tears melt And fall away I Revealed myself I Explained myself I Opened up a part of me Once shattered I am Tired of this shadowed life I am Spiritually sore Waste my life? Anything to save me From this inner strife In This Dark dark place I sit here Gods disgrace [ There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. [This message has been edited by ranidae_poet (11-14-2003 02:30 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I can really relate to what your saying, being able to open up finially, but still feeling weak and scared. Good poem here, I like the part about your frozen tears melting, nice image. I hope you days get brighter.  ~Lex |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
Hey there, thank you for reading this. I hate that you have felt this..but i think most of us have which is unfortunate. thanks again for reading and commenting. |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Well done!! I liked the look of this one...It read well...I think I know watcha mean... Click |
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LadyMels New Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 5Texas |
To relate, is to have been there. And I'm sure many have and are still there. Great!! |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Yes, i know what you mean a lot. I want to be free of this...plague...like, yesterday. I like this poem. Prayers & Hugs - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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