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Dark Poetry #4
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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
0 posted 2003-11-16 05:19 PM


Needing something
Dont know what
Satisfying
Some kinda shot ?

Body craving
Crying out
Terrifying
Sanity doubt

Lustful wanting
Screaming urge
fantasizing
Forceful surge

Hungry yearning
soulful feast
Gratifying
Feed the beast
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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 83
NY
1 posted 2003-11-16 07:23 PM

either horny, or pissed...either way,good poem
Maddy vanD
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since 2003-09-06
Posts 99
Newfoundland, Canada
2 posted 2003-11-17 01:34 AM

Damn!!!
I ain't exactly sure what it is that is needed here, but i am sure it is sore needed.
Very powerful bit of writing...well done

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real
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