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Dark Poetry #4

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Myshkin
New Member

since 2006-07-25

Posts 6
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2006-08-16 10:46 PM

The darkest star,
The bluest blue blooming.
When the something of anything
Becomes the nothing
Of everything.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-20 05:12 PM

It was short but it said everything. Nice write. i hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing.

~Courtney~

burntsiena
Junior Member

since 2006-08-10

Posts 34
Rhode Island

2 posted 2006-08-28 01:49 PM

I get a very Buddhist feel from this - and no, its not too pretentious! The shortness adds to the idea of something rejoining the nothing that it was always a part of.

Lisey
Junior Member

since 2006-08-27

Posts 36
UK (Wales)

3 posted 2006-08-28 01:57 PM

wow short and sweet really gets ya thinking!! loved it

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