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Dark Poetry #4
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Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
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0 posted 2007-04-20 01:10 AM


You stood there,
Watching,
You stood there,
Sucking,
You Stood there,
Taking.

You're just a sponge,
All you do is take,
Untill finally...
I am left,
Without family,
Without friends,
Without faith.
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lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
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va
1 posted 2007-05-17 02:40 PM

awww.
=/
it's great.

Becca.
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2 posted 2007-05-18 01:48 AM

really like this.. especially the last few lines
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~
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