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Dark Poetry #4

What's Left?

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

0 posted 2007-05-31 11:45 AM

It is so dark,
Where am I?

No where to run,
I'm a needle in a hay stack.

Where is my home?
Who is this person?

Will this Hell ever end?
Or will I die here?

What is left?
Why?

Daylight,
I can run.

Most of me died last night,
What is left?

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2007-06-04 06:22 PM

i was reaaaly taken with this poem. i love the mysterious rhetorical take you had with this, i really enjoyed this one.

as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

2 posted 2007-06-07 08:14 AM

Thank you. This was inspired after reading a poem about a very personal matter to me.

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

3 posted 2007-06-10 01:56 PM

This was absolutely gripping. Excellent.

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