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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Chains of daisies cover the door to ancient bones within, entombed in bands of iron, unsullied by the tools of insidious plunderers, coveters of by-gone treasure from long ago centuries I hope that I have not posted this one before, would not want to be a bore. Maggie |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Maggie- With writing such as this, you could never be a bore. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
An interest in archeology perhaps? I do anyway, this was very good and appealed to that sense of discovery that intrigues me about the ancient past. I can almost imagine the smell of the dusty old crypt... sigh ex animo, Aaron Woodside They say the sweet is never as sweet without the sour. So where's my sweet? |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Ringo appreciate your reply. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you aaron, pleased that it gave you a sense of the past. |
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Tourniquet Junior Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 13 |
As an archeaologist, the title and poem appealed to me straight off.. As a poet, I felt this poem much deeper, almost as if it were metaphorically describing the layer of dust collected upon my heart. That inner tomb that I hold safe and secure from all of lifes ups and downs.. Of my own innocence lost, like a childhood dream from so long ago. Really liked this one  |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you so much touriquet, I will dedicate this poem to you. Maggie |
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