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Dark Poetry #4

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moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

0 posted 2007-08-18 06:53 AM

They peered into my crib
with blood in their eye.

The ones I had previously
left to die.

Mother offered me
her swollen breast.

Forgetting I once fed her
to a dinner guest.

Brother Mike
remembered the spike.

I drove through his forehead
that fateful night.

The Saxons entered England
spoiling for a fight.

Brother Harry sang
like a canary.

When I lopped off his ears
first left, then right.

Father looked on
with a twisted grin.

When he saw in me
his original sin.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-08-18 01:43 PM

I really liked this it was very interesting

Krysti

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

2 posted 2007-08-18 02:39 PM

Very interesting.

I couldn't help but like it.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

3 posted 2007-08-18 11:29 PM

wow...thanks guys.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

4 posted 2007-08-22 12:52 PM

hmm...different. I liked it

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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