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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
fighting the urges as my brain surges ready to explode weighed down with a heavy load emotions spewing forth cant express them for what its worth breaking down inside need a place to hide can't break away from this feeling bending me over kneeling rage utters forth its call and I slam my head against the wall |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I liked this alot. It actually elicited a smile from me-although a grim one at that.  I think the rhythym in this was excellent, the rhyming perfect, and there isn't a single thing I would change.J'aime votre poésie! ♥ Rerra Leigh |
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