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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
I'm not sure if this is "kosher" but /pip/Forum101/HTML/001646.html here's a link to a very powerful poem in another forum....sorry if it's a problem. |
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penguin5 Junior Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 21Washington |
Thanks, I posted it in this section. Minor changes in the spacing that were left out origionally. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
only problem is I think u r only allowed to post a poem once unless you post again in critical analysis..my mistake for the confusion...guess they'll have to spank me... |
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penguin5 Junior Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 21Washington |
if someone could delete "retreat" from teen poetry, i agree that this is a better place for it. I dont have the power to delete threads. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
maybe the mods can help...btw, welcome to pip talk. |
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