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Dark Poetry #4

Obscurity

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

0 posted 2008-03-20 01:44 AM

Darkness falls,
I see the forgotten space before me,
Devouring my thoughts, my sanity,
I can not turn back,
As the oblivion grows ever bigger.

I struggle.... tangled in this mesh of obscurity,
Beyond the abyss of eternal void,
The cacophony of hellish music...
Teasing my mind and soul,
This obscurity...

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-04-19 10:45 PM

nice write

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-04-22 10:45 PM

I love poems like this. it's like the person in the poem isn't really thinking about anything spacifically, there just in a daze. The way the words are arranged it makes me wonder what else is going on in their mind. Good write,

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