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Dark Poetry #4

why

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-04-28 06:56 PM

why are u there when everythings wrong

why aint you there when im not so strong

why do u seem to hurt me and make me cry

why do u make this tear fall from my eye

why do u seem to go away and never come around

mom why do u push my heart straight towards the ground

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

1 posted 2008-04-28 09:36 PM

angelfacegurl,

Strong... I can feel it.

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-04-28 09:48 PM

sad..but good.

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

PAiGEY
Junior Member

since 2008-05-01

Posts 13
victooriaa

3 posted 2008-05-01 10:24 PM

Thats really deep.
But really really good.
Keep it up.

Paige.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-05-03 12:38 PM

I don't really know what to say either than I know a little about how u feel. Great write.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

frail
Junior Member

since 2008-05-04

Posts 12

5 posted 2008-05-04 12:20 PM

You made me cry with this one. I use to feel a lil like this. Glad I made it up with my mom.

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