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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan
0 posted 2008-05-01 06:18 PM

Tick Tock

I rub my eyes
And sigh so deep
This bare light bulb casts
Ugly shadows

The clock  repeats over and over
Just how lonely I am.

The floor is cold
On bare feet

Yoin
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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-05-01 06:30 PM

Hmmm...it's like ur waiting for something to happen and it's not. Nice wirte.

       {~~*~~}
  

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
2 posted 2008-05-02 08:02 PM

thank you much

yoin
AAB
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since 2008-04-10
Posts 99
Canada
3 posted 2008-05-06 08:05 PM

simple yet wonderfull

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride
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