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Dark Poetry #4
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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
0 posted 2008-05-02 10:19 PM

no more pain

not me you can blame

you thought we would always be togather

but our love never meant forever

so more hand

now i can stand

i dont need you

me and you were through
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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-07-23 10:39 PM

good poem!!
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-29 12:53 PM

I love it when a girl finds her feet. Yeah, a couple is complimenting and even completing, but taking stock in oneself is the first step in being a contributing member to a healthy pairing. Good poem.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
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