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Dark Poetry #4

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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-08 09:15 PM

Emptiness

Alone

Confused

Broken

Whispers in the dark.

Always cold, never sweet

Stuck

All alone

No one to convince me to stay.

Gone

Alone

Dead

defeated

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-09 07:58 AM

Hey you finally found a title! not bad Em, not bad at all..

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-05-09 11:11 PM

Why thank you, and thanks for trying to help with the title...

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-05-10 01:09 AM

this kinda actually reminds me of myself, great job as always

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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