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Dark Poetry #4

Palms Up

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2008-05-25 05:36 PM

PALMS UP

Within the crushing silence
love implodes.
Dying with a helpless whimper,
it’s severed strings
dangle in the wind.

Alone in this hotel room,
which no one has ever called home,
I sit still, looking out
at the coming storm.
With palms up,
I feel the pain seep out.

The wind billows the curtains
and rain splashes on cold feet.
All the questions both stop and begin
for the last time.

Yoin

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-25 05:42 PM

NICE

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

2 posted 2008-05-26 01:11 AM

Really good.

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

3 posted 2008-05-27 10:22 PM

Thanks for your replys to this dark piece
Yoin

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