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Dark Poetry #4

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alan a
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since 2008-07-23

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india

0 posted 2008-07-23 05:09 AM

I see a crawlie creep her way,
Through overlying roots under my swing.
She looks up and wonders,
Why shadows crawled,
Every time I swung back, over her world.

To is to dark and fro is for light,
She seems to reckon and silently creeps.
I wonder if she knows,
The harm I could deal,
If I decide to stroke her immaculate realm.

And then I realize the frailty of mine.

alan a
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since 2008-07-23

Posts 17
india

1 posted 2008-07-23 05:10 AM

not exactly dark...

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2 posted 2008-07-23 12:37 PM

Not exactly dark, but extremely well written!

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alan a
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since 2008-07-23

Posts 17
india

3 posted 2008-07-23 03:25 PM

thank you...n yes, i got what u sent me in the mail...

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4 posted 2008-07-23 08:45 PM

alan... I enjoy this...

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alan a
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since 2008-07-23

Posts 17
india

5 posted 2008-07-23 11:55 PM

thank u may

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