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Dark Poetry #4

the animal inside us all

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2003-12-22 04:13 PM

Animal

In nature everything has a death-date
In reality everything wants to be free.
But here it makes my body seperate
From the animal deep with-in me.

I once had so many problems
I ignored them when they came.
But now that I have so few
I never feel the same.

My problems boiled with-in me
It made my life, turn into fate.
But tell me why this happens
When my animal is filled with hate.

I had a fire inside me
One I couldn't see.
It then burned uncontrolbly
From the animal deep with-in me.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

1 posted 2003-12-22 05:09 PM

Very nice poem, the animals within us all, tends to get the better of us. Keep writing.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2003-12-22 10:01 PM

I like this, very nice =)

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

Lozza
New Member

since 2003-12-22

Posts 5
New Zealander (in UK)

3 posted 2003-12-23 09:54 AM

I can relate to this piece totally. a great read.

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