| Dark Poetry #4 |
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desperado16 New Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 7 |
Promises unwound, Merely a Bare spool Remains, With handling, Chips carved Among the Splinterizing center, Faintly standing, Until, Two piercing Blows Shatter remnants, Dagger-like slices Soar From one peak, To the other, The other, Awaiting hurled Blades, Welcoming lacerations, For it Perceives, The wrongs committed, Inhumanity performed, Damage caused. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Des16~ Welcome to Passions~ I hope we'll see more from you ... enjoy the poetry of others also~ We have so many talented poets here ... WELCOME~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Keep it up! Nice! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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