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Claustrophobia |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
Walls getting closer The room getting smaller Breaths getting shorter One by one they fall Like a litter of poisoned kittens It's a mystery The windows where open... They killed each other Through their feelings. Jealousy Hate Envy Pity and even Love |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like this alot...on this line: The windows where open... Did you mean - were open... not sure, I like this very creative |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i liked this too, the ending was especially creative =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
Thanx a bunch fo you comments  and yes I did mean were not where...technical oversight ! |
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