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Inot the dark |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Into the dark I venture Alone, on the edge The whispered voices at my ear Scream words of ferocity The trees close in on me Deranged faces tear at my sanity Into the dark I venture Alone, on the edge Fallen angels at my feat Death before my eyes Isolated and hostile, I rise to meet my deliverance Petrified of the dark, I am in hell alone You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow, this is good chicka! "Deranged faces tear at my sanity" ..."I rise to meet my deliverance" i love that! great job! =) - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good write! Grover. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
"The trees close in on me Deranged faces tear at my sanity" This was good. I liked this part the best, it really stood out to me. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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