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Dark Poetry #4

Shaking

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2004-03-11 11:47 PM

Drank to much?
spinning,
slipping,

what is real?

what do I feel?

Lost in myself,
I rule my thoughts.

But what matters is,

what we do?

Music,
words and cadence.

Float,
slide on through.

Another day done, and I,

have hurt none.

Click

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-03-12 05:01 PM

Everything you say is so profound without being confussing.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-03-12 05:08 PM

that was awesome. I loved it. Your name is sweet! ~lol~

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-03-12 06:13 PM

This is my fave one of the three you've posted. I like your style of writing.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2004-03-13 04:01 AM

drank too much...spinning...

nice write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

5 posted 2004-03-13 05:58 PM

Thnak you all for reading...the words

Click

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