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Dark Poetry #4

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NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

0 posted 2004-03-30 01:16 PM

Bitten deep and bitten hard
that is why my scar has scared

the night it happend i was alone
in my house my humble home

The night was cold it was pitch black
all i could see was his bright red cap

looking at me through the window
wondering when i would get up and go

it happend then the time i left
my house my humble home

never to return again
his house is now my humble home

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-03-30 10:09 PM

I am not sure what to think about this one, i like it though. It was definetely really awesome...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

2 posted 2004-03-31 04:42 PM

I liked it... uhh random side comment Manchester NH?

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

3 posted 2004-04-14 01:34 AM

creative master , mind twisted me for a few
good write ...

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JDW III

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

4 posted 2004-05-14 01:14 AM

good write reminds me of vampires who i have a deep fasination with

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