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RaBBiT_K
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since 2004-03-28
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0 posted 2004-03-31 10:02 PM

I am you ghost, dwelling right behind you,
I am your brother, standing right beside you,
I am your father, standing right by you,
I am your fear, dwelling right inside you,

Who am I, standing there?
I am God, be aware.
Sorry if any are offended,
No blasphemy was intended.
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click1
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since 2003-03-25
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1 posted 2004-04-01 10:42 PM

nicely done..

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
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2 posted 2004-04-03 06:44 AM

nice write, if you believe there is a  god...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."
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