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Dark Poetry #4

Virtue of.........

croyles
Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-04-17 01:23 PM

The tile is strange I know, but for specific reasons I had to put it like that.

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Virtue of...:

My dear friend Virtue,
Sauntered through my minds abyss,
Spoke to me with much a bliss,
’Bout my love I love so dear.

For some reason I found clear
On her neck, like rugg'ed sands,
Marks so red that marked my hands.

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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-04-18 05:12 AM

it seems like yoyu are just getting started wiht this poem...i wanted to see more, good beginning though

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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