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Teen Poetry #7

Just A Place Up North

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-10-15 10:55 PM

I wish all these smiles
Were not all your fault
As I sit on the opposite end
Of a telephone line
Reaching towards New England

I wish just this once you would
Be the cause of some sadness
And this telephone line
Would be disconnected
And New England was just a place up north

I wish all this loneliness
Was not all your fault
As I sit with blank stationary
Planning ways to not sound desperate
With an envelope addressed to New England

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-15 11:31 PM

?say to words what ahh

Whitehowl
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 10

2 posted 2003-10-15 11:55 PM

wasn't to bad but i just couldn't get into it as much. but a pretty good poem though.

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