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Teen Poetry #7

tiny moments

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

0 posted 2004-05-12 09:14 PM

Finding the colorful bag of peanut m&m's
leaning on the computer
that my brother must have left here,
And after the third one that I roll into my
greedy hand,
it's orange
again.
And I wonder
if it's a bag full of orange,
Or my coincidential pouring.
Then a yellow drops.

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-13 01:58 AM

Im really not sure what this means...
But I kinda like it lol
Keep it up!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-05-13 07:48 AM

This poem sounds kinda mysterious in a way to me, even though I really don't understand it.
Great job anyways, just keep writing and I'll keep on reading.

~Alli~

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