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Teen Poetry #7

Helpless

Peeps-Peter
Junior Member

since 2003-07-19

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-10-22 07:09 PM

Desending through the green ocean air,
seeking help,
calling out to someone who's not there.
Give me an answer, I need your hand,
but I can not reach.
I try to listen for voices, that I will not hear,
finially the sound I've been longing for,
a huge spalsh of green
and I'm conscious again.

[This message has been edited by Peeps-Peter (10-22-2003 07:11 PM).]

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

1 posted 2003-10-22 09:46 PM

Ahhh the ocean air that calms the thirst for wanting. Waitng hoping and looking. Right on.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-22 10:40 PM

good onnnnnneeeeeeeee

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