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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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A turn floor sunflower dizzies to an end with a smack of pop red combustion i ignore colour clashes against glass panes the forehead eeks gravitationaly drops blind date amplified blobs forced by my finger eventually to pursue their way there's talc before my eyes as i try to count the petals my feet crisp sticky slippy pollen the sunflower grinds to a halt slain step out now to the now shaded floor. ------ not happy with this poem yet, but have grinded to a halt. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I hope your kidding this is brilliant writing, i'll be on the lookout for more. Andrew  |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
oh, thanks, nice of you to say so |
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