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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I am fine, I am great, and it will be this way, or that. I am dead or I am dying, either way, I'm surely flying, in a downward line of motion, so convincing and sparkling. I am good or I am suitable for something new and beautiful. Or something just the same, dressed up, lets play charades. the feautures on your face were morphing into something undefinable. a feeling despised, an idea contrived, only to be denied. I am useless, and waning into someone so unattaining to anything meaningful or right. So if you must ask in order to know, the answer is the same: I am good and I am fine, redefined and a little out of line. The color smearing is truely pretty when you squint your eyes. |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I like how the words flow right into each other...good job! Keep it up! |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
I really like how this flows.. It's kind of weird and really cool awesome job! "love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die" |
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