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Teen Poetry #7

The One Meant For Me

C_ROK06
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 49

0 posted 2003-10-27 07:25 PM

Never have I met him
Embrace to embrace
Hand to hand
Face to face

My love for him is strong all the same
A deep moving current
Passionate and firm
Yet so far away

Oh how I wish I could hold him
How I wish our eyes would meet
How I wish that smile would be meant for me

And the agony of not having your kiss upon my cheek
Will torture my soul until we meet

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

1 posted 2003-10-27 08:07 PM

Wow, I absolutely loved this, especially the first stanza, such good writing!

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-10-27 08:18 PM

very well done, I also like the first stanza a lot. Great job!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-10-27 09:52 PM

Victoria, I love this poem. It's very
romantic....my favorite kind of poems.

Hugs

Ethel

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-10-28 12:05 PM

sweeeeeeeeeet

-=Kiff=-
Junior Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 16
North wales UK

5 posted 2003-10-28 08:10 AM

NICE!

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

6 posted 2003-10-28 09:41 AM

I like this one just because it gives a weird sense of mystery to the whole piece. Enter the agony of not having the kiss on the cheek, interesting. I like it, kewl.

NJS

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-10-28 01:07 PM

*sigh* I know exactly what you're going through.
Excellent poem, thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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