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Teen Poetry #7

goodbye to the day

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2004-11-15 04:09 AM

goodbye to the day i once knew
hello to the darkness i now call home
alone and no one to call my own
scared and on my own

in the shadows i see what i now know
when the light seeps in
i see what i once knew and lost
goodbye to it all

i see what could of have been
and what has become
i see the light no longer
and into the shadows i go

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2004-11-15 08:22 AM

Great writing Robin

Andrew

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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2 posted 2004-11-15 05:57 PM

"goodbye to the day i once knew
hello to the darkness i now call home
alone and no one to call my own
scared and on my own"

Like that part...very emotional write...enjoyed~

~Alli~

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2004-11-15 09:27 PM

I enjoyed this, I can relate to the feelings expressed. Smile everythings going to be alright

Smile

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-16 11:54 AM

thanks you guys

awwwwwww zu i heart you.

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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