pretending - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #7

pretending

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-15 02:29 PM

The love
and affection;
unfound.

The pain
and the strife
abound.

The fear
and the worry;
unending.

The smiles
and the laughter:
pretending.

~Express Yourself~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-11-15 06:18 PM

Like this alot..short but still good.
just wondering, your ~dream child~, but is your alter-ego earthdust? lol..just wondering!

Like I said...nice job.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-11-15 09:24 PM

This was good, short and to the point. Creative and innovative.

Smile

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-15 10:26 PM

yes alli! i am earthdust too.

hehe... i learned my previous account here still existed , so i use them both now.

ill eventually stick w just 1, but for now, i dont know which to choose...

maybe we should have a vote!

~Express Yourself~

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-16 11:55 AM

isn't it great how a few words can describe a lot. really great poem dear.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

5 posted 2004-11-26 05:10 AM

great write cant wait to read more
keep posting!!!!!!!!

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2004-11-26 06:15 AM

Great work, keep on writing

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.