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Teen Poetry #7

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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-17 12:40 PM

the days march on
they always do.

the time they mark
i'm marching too.

should the ranks break,
in the files found fault...

Call to attention!

Company!

Hault!

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-18-2004 02:43 AM).]

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-17 01:27 PM

edited for better impact!

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2004-11-17 07:19 PM

Wow! Awesome!!! Thats all I can say- seriously!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-18 02:44 AM

thanks man.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-19 08:05 AM

interesting lil piece. nicely done

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

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