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Teen Poetry #7

lonely

xtel
Junior Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 16

0 posted 2003-11-02 06:17 AM

Walking through the path of life
Seems that the only thing I do is hide
Hide from love
Hide from pain
Hide from joy
Hide from myself
So much people around
And yet I feel so lonely.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-02 01:28 PM

yep yep yep......

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-11-02 04:17 PM

This is so sad. I hope things
are beter soon.

Hugs

Ethel

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2003-11-02 04:40 PM

I have felt like that at times too, good write

-ash

I know you think that I shouldn't still love you
I'll tell you that
But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it
Where's the sense in tha

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-11-02 07:02 PM

Welcome to Piptalk! I hope you like it here. For your first post, this was good. I liked the "hide from pain, hide from joy" part especially. Good write and keep it up.

"Cut my life into pieces, this is my last resort."~PaPaRoach

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