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Teen Poetry #7

My Breath Stinks

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2005-03-07 01:11 AM

My breath is pretty stinky
It smells like donk.
Or a rabid pig smoking a cigar
In some old honky-tonk.

It reminds me of a gravel pit.
Yeah, that’s what it’s like.
Or when you set fire
To the front tired of a bike.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-03-07 08:49 AM

go brush your teeth!!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2005-03-07 01:21 PM

Wow, you must have really bad breath! Im glad Im not anywhere near you lol.
Another funny one from you that I love.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2005-03-07 07:44 PM

This is unusually honest and self-deprecating, I love it.

Andrew

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